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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 22:49:39 GMT 1
As many of you may know, I am taking a course at school known as the 'Higher Research Project'. So far I have written about 'Ant Castes' and 'Ant Anatomy'. Altogether the project has to be around the 2500 word mark, but with just these two Sections I am at 1500. I planned to do a big intro into the world of ants and how their community works, but I am no where done with the intro and at 1500 words, I think I need a new plan(bare in mind I have been doing this since September). Manity mention Hymenoptera a while back and gave me ideas on what I could do, but because it was off topic posts were deleted and everything he had put has been lost. So now I'm struggling for ideas on how I can reduce the current size and answer the question. What I want help on is: - Shall I stick with the current question, or change it(if so suggest one)
- What topics to mention and talk about
The second milestone is on the Monday 25th of January 2011 and I don't think I've added much since the previous milestone in December. Any IDEAS and CRITICISM you have would be awesome and appreciated. Drew
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 22:52:00 GMT 1
Id talk about protection of the Nest. With Majors and Mini Majors ect.
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Post by animal123 on Jan 22, 2011 22:53:57 GMT 1
Mini majors? :-P Do you mean medias?
Thomas, I think suggested a very good idea. But you said you talked abotu ants castes so maybe you have already introduced it?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 22:57:28 GMT 1
Yes, sorry I have only kept Niger so im a bit of a 'newbie' in that field
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 22:57:51 GMT 1
@thomas How can we relate it to the proposal question? Because I have to pretty much answer that question IF possible, which in my case I believe it is.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 22:59:34 GMT 1
I'd post the current project, but I do not know whether I'm allowed too(I can discuss it with anybody localy, but I unsure whether I can post it on the internet.)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 23:00:13 GMT 1
Id talk about protection of the Nest. With Majors and Mini Majors ect. I always though they were majors and minors, you call them medias ;D.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 23:00:44 GMT 1
Why can you not post it? Is it Rules of your Bin Lid School?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 23:02:49 GMT 1
Why can you not post it? Is it Rules of your Bin Lid School? I'm not sure, it's about the exam board as this is coursework. I'm unsure whether it is in the rules are not so I'd rather not risk it.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 23:03:19 GMT 1
How would they find out
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Post by Myrm on Jan 22, 2011 23:04:49 GMT 1
Drew.
If you want you can email or PM the work you have done so far to me and I will read through it and cut it down in size, leaving you with more words to play with for the rest of it.
Feel free to take any information from my main website too.
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Post by Myrm on Jan 22, 2011 23:06:08 GMT 1
How would they find out If there is a chance it is against the rules of his school then I would rather he did not post it on this forum. This is vary important to Drew and I don't want him messing it up or being encouraged to do so.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 23:06:19 GMT 1
How would they find out It is called the 'Higher Research Project' for a reason, I have to provide my sources etc. and they do searches etc. to check I haven't stolen anything(that isn't quoted/referred to). The whole point of the project is to find an answer to a question and provide the resources and stuff used.
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Post by Myrm on Jan 22, 2011 23:15:54 GMT 1
Drew. If you want you can email or PM the work you have done so far to me and I will read through it and cut it down in size, leaving you with more words to play with for the rest of it. Feel free to take any information from my main website too. Oh and Drew, if you'd prefer to email it you can email it to my private account on the warship. I won't add anything or write any of it for you but I will simply highlight what I think you could remove without it detracting from the essay so as to advise you on how you can shorten it to make more room for the rest.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2011 23:19:25 GMT 1
Oh noes! Half of my project is missing I thought I had done more than Anatomy and Castes
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